I'm back from my mini hiatus. This week's word was a little difficult for me, but its better to have something rather than nothing.
Damn boy, you’ve got some serious lack of game. I definitely came to this bar so you could buy me a drink, try to guess my sign, and woo my phone number from my lips. I’m not that tipsy, so don’t get your hopes up; and for the love of all that is good, please do not use another line on me. If you can’t manage that I’ll have to settle with you. I’ve already roofied your drink just to shut you up. You’re not really my type, but I bet your body would throw the police off my trail.
Wow. There's a lot going on here. That could be a whole book.
ReplyDeleteOne minor edit, though. In the last line, "Throw" is what you meant, not "through". Yes?
Nice job, though.
Oh good lord! I completely missed that. Thank you so much. I'll fix it right now. I'm a little embarrassed about that. I read through it almost ten times.
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing. Makes me want to know more of this story.
ReplyDeleteI love it!
ReplyDeleteI'm with Tara. I want to know the back story behind this piece!
ReplyDeletePoor fella! He obviously doesn't know what he's in for. Great piece, so much in 100 words.
ReplyDeleteSo much in such few words. Great story.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy the narrator's voice. Cool, calm, venomous. (And I agree with the others that knowing how she came to this point would be interesting.)
ReplyDeleteNicely done.